Question

【题目】书面表达

写一篇短文介绍你自己。50词左右。

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Answer 1

【答案】

Hi! My name is Tony. I am 12 years old. I am a middle school student now. I am in Class Two, Grade Seven. I like playing football, singing, painting and swimming. And apple is my fauvourite fruit. I like rice, too. I am good at English. I am helpful. I often help my parents do housework. I am out-going and kind. I want to be your friend. Do you want to be my friend?

【解析】

试题分析：试题分析：本文属于话题作文，题目是介绍自己，先审题，弄清写作要求审题是写好作文的前提，也是书面表达的基础。如果写偏了题，语言表达再好也很难得高分。审题时要注意两个方面：理清思路，确定体裁、框架结构和内容。尽量用上自己最熟悉的词来组织。如课文里的句子根据自己的实际情况改编。从而避免单词拼写的错误。

【亮点说明】：这是一篇比较优秀的作文。作者很好介绍了自己的爱好，性格特点，希望成为大家的朋友。思路清晰，表达准确，句式灵活。使用熟悉的句型My name is Tony. I am 12 years old. I am a middle school student now. I am in Class Two, Grade Seven.，语言表达要符合英语习惯，准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，用词准确、句子通顺、行文连贯。没有单词拼写和语法方面的错误。