Question

在2014年3月13日结束的两会中，李克强总理提到“干一寸胜过说一尺”。我们青少年每个人都拥有梦想，而实现梦想需要行动。

请你根据所给图片写一篇题为“Take actions to realize our dreams” 的英语短文。你的短文应包括以下内容：

(1)描述图片内容，如情景、人物(Frank)、动作等；并简要表达你的观点；

(2)你的梦想是成为一名……，你将如何努力实现（至少两点）。

注意：

(1)词数100词左右，短文首段已给出，不计入总词数；

(2)文中不得提及考生所在学校及自己的姓名。

Take actions to realize our dreams

All of us have dreams, but how can we realize our dreams?

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Take actions to realize our dreams

All of us have dreams, but how can we realize our dreams?

From the pictures, we know that Frank only lay in bed and dreamed to become a doctor when he was 15 years old. However, 45 years later he still dreams to be a doctor lying in bed. It is clear that he lives in the dream without any actions. This is the reason why he has failed to realize his dream. In fact, it is not an easy thing to realize the dream.

As a student in Grade Nine, I also have a dream. I would like to be an engineer. And I will realize my dream step by step. First I should work hard. As the saying goes：“No pains，no gains.” Don’t be afraid of any difficulty. Difficulty will make me wiser, braver and stronger. Next, to finish it, I ought to believe in myself all the time.

Nothing is impossible if we put our hearts into it.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。要求根据所给图片写一篇题为“Take actions to realize our dreams” 的英语短文。本文所给材料比较详细，并且给出了具体要求，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。注意时态语时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了一些长句和名言，为文章增色不少.如: we know that Frank only lay in bed and dreamed to become a doctor when he was 15 years old. （我们知道Frank只是躺在床上梦想着当他15岁时能成为一名医生。）“No pains，no gains.”（不劳无获），Nothing is impossible if we put our hearts into it.（有志者，事竟成）等,学习中注意总结 ,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理.

考点：图画作文。