Question

【题目】书面表达

假如你有一个最好的朋友叫张华，请以 “My best friend”为题，写一篇100词左右的书面表达。可适当发挥。

年龄	15岁，第一中学八年级学生，既是我的邻居又是我的好友。
外貌	黑色短发，方脸，明亮而笑眯眯的眼睛，英俊。
性格	真诚，乐于助人---- ----
学习	尖子生，用功刻苦，所有学科中最喜欢英语。
爱好	1. 旅行。经常和父母进行旅行，希望有一天能周游世界。 2. DIY。阅读了很多有关DIY的书。会做水果沙拉，三明治。
理想	他喜欢----， 长大后想---- （自由发挥一句）

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Answer 1

【答案】

My best friend

I have a friend. His name is Zhang Hua. He is not only my neighbor but also my best friend. He studies in No.1 Middle School,he is in Grade 8. He has short black hair and a round face. He has bright and smiling eyes.He is very handsome.He is very honest. He is such a helpful boy that he often gives his seat to others on the bus.He studies very hard and he is one of the top students.His favorite subject is English.He likes trvelling and often tarvels with his parents.He hopes to travel around the world one day.He likes DIY and reads many books about DIY.He can make fruit salad and sandwiches.When he grows up，he wants to be a social worker，listen to the people and help them with their difficulties.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，题目中给出的材料较为齐全。写作中注意将所提示内容的情况介绍清楚。根据材料可知，本文主要用一般现在时态，第三人称进行叙述，写作中主语时态及主谓一致等问题。注意不要遗漏要点，做到语句通顺。为了使意思更加连贯可适当使用连接词。

写作亮点：本文在写作中使用了很多固定句式，如：help sb with sth帮助某人做某事；such…that…如此……以至于……；not only…but also…不但……而且……；grow up长大等。所以在学习中，我们应注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理.