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根据中文设置的情景、英文提示词语以及表格所提供的信息,写出语法正确、意思连贯、符合逻辑的英文文段.

注意:1.字数60~80.

2.所给的英文提示词语及表格所提供的信息必须都用上.(可适当发挥)

3.发言稿的开头和结尾已给出.

假如你是张斌,今年暑假你将参加学校组织的赴加拿大“绿色之旅”夏令营活动.请你准备一篇在开营式上的自我介绍发言稿.

name, Zhang Bin, fifteen year old, live in Beijing, favorite subject, biology…

Dear friends,

I'm very glad to introduce myself to you. ________________________________

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  学生:习作:

  Dear friends,

  I'm very glad to introduce myself to you. My name is Zhang Bin. I'm fifteen years old. I live in Beijing. One of my favourite subjects are(X1) biology. I'm interesting(X2) in drawing. In my free time, I often go camping, draw some pictures of plants, and enjoy singing(X3) of birds in nature. I want to be a biologist when I will grow up.

  I feel luck(X4) to join you. I hope we can be good friends and do our best to make our earth more beautiful and much greener.

  That's all. Thank you for listening.

  剖析:“one of…”之一,其后所跟的名词或代词用复数,但谓语动词必须用单数.所以此处的are要改为is

  例如:One of them is lost.他们中的一个人迷路了.

  2be interested in是固定短语,意为“对……感兴趣”,而interesting则表示事物本身有趣的,令人产生兴趣的,例如:

  I am not interested in what he says.对他所说的话我不感兴趣.

  The story is very interesting.这个故事很有趣.

  I will give you some interesting storybooks.我将给你几本有趣的故事书.

  故文中的interesting要改为interested

  3enjoy后跟doing表示“喜欢,乐于做某事”,而这里是特指自然界中鸟的声音,因此文中的singing是动名词,前应加the

  4feel“觉得”是系动词,后应跟形容词做表语,所以名词luck应改为形容词lucky

  总评:本文作者能围绕主题来介绍自己,层层深入、语言流畅、表达准确、形象生动、具体、个别用词欠妥,还需不断加强.


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提示作文

根据中文设置的情景和英文提示词语,写出语法正确,意思连贯,符合逻辑的英文文段.

所给的英文提示词语必须都用上,中文提示内容不必逐字翻译.(字数60~80)提示:假如你是李雷,现在你给你的英国朋友Jim写一封信,告诉他你和同学们上周日去香山公园郊游的活动的感受.信的开头和结尾已给出.

你们早上七点钟在学校门口集合,大约八点钟到达香山公园……

meet, arrive, at the foot of the hill, have a party, play games, climb, on the top of, see, how, beautiful, feel proud(自豪的), live Beijing, the 2008 Olympic Games, hold

  Dear Jim,

  Last Sunday my classmates and I want to Xiangshan Park, I hope we will meet in Beijing in 2008. Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Lei

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