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根据中文设置的情景和英文提示词语,写出语法正确,意思连贯,符合逻辑的英文文段.

所给的英文提示词语必须都用上,中文提示内容不必逐字翻译.(字数60~80)提示:假如你是李雷,现在你给你的英国朋友Jim写一封信,告诉他你和同学们上周日去香山公园郊游的活动的感受.信的开头和结尾已给出.

你们早上七点钟在学校门口集合,大约八点钟到达香山公园……

meet, arrive, at the foot of the hill, have a party, play games, climb, on the top of, see, how, beautiful, feel proud(自豪的), live Beijing, the 2008 Olympic Games, hold

  Dear Jim,

  Last Sunday my classmates and I want to Xiangshan Park, I hope we will meet in Beijing in 2008. Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Lei

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解析:

  学生:习作:

  Dear Jim,

  Last Sunday my classmates and I went to Xiangshan Park, we met at school gate at 7:00 in the morning. We arrived at the foot of the hill at about 8:00. We have a party(X1) and play games(X2) after we climbed the hill. On the top of the hill, I have a wonderful view(X3). How beautiful Beijing is! I felt proud because I live(X4) Beijing. And the 2008 Olympic games hold(X5) in Beijing.

  I hope we will meet in Beijing in 2008.

  Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Lei

  剖析:1.有了过去的时间状语last Sunday动词应该用一般过去时,所以havehad

  4live为不及物动词,不能跟宾语Beijing,因此要在live后加in

  5.此处为一般将来时的被动语态,应改为will be held

  剖析:文章只写明了大部分要点,语言有一些错误,但仍能达意,行文基本连贯.


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提示作文

根据中文设置的情景、英文提示词语以及表格所提供的信息,写出语法正确、意思连贯、符合逻辑的英文文段.

注意:1.字数60~80.

2.所给的英文提示词语及表格所提供的信息必须都用上.(可适当发挥)

3.发言稿的开头和结尾已给出.

假如你是张斌,今年暑假你将参加学校组织的赴加拿大“绿色之旅”夏令营活动.请你准备一篇在开营式上的自我介绍发言稿.

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