Question

10．Write at least 60words about the topic"My last winter holiday in junior middle school"（以"我初中的最后一个寒假"为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）
即将到来的寒假是你在初中阶段最后一个寒假．你想怎样度过这个寒假呢？你最想做的事情是什么呢？你觉得你父母会赞成你的想法吗？请把你的想法写下来，告诉他们吧．
（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分．）
It's my last winter holiday in junior middle school that seems to be the most precious one．Owing to this，I feel like doing something meaningful．Reading extra books for three hours every day is the thing that I prefer to do most．I think my parents will be in favour of my thought．First and foremost，books are as the"spirit food"in our life．Secondly，as the proverb said，"All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy．"I'm preparing for my essential test indeed，but extra books will give me a clearer mind to study．In addition，if my parents think my thoughts are reasonable，they'll agree with me of course．That's my last winter holiday in junior middle school．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．内容是以"My last winter holiday in junior middle school"为题说说你对这最后一个暑假的想法．时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时．人称主要为第一人称和第三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1你想怎样度过这个寒假呢？
2你最想做的事情是什么呢？
3你觉得你父母会赞成你的想法吗？
常用到的重点短语
owing to 因为…
feel like doing sth 想要做某事
 in favour of支持  同意
First and foremost首先
in addition此外
agree with赞同

【高分句型】
1．①Reading extra books for three hours every day is the thing②that I ③prefer to do most．
①动名词短语作为主语，谓语动词用单数is．
②定语从句，that是关系词，作为从句的宾语．先行词the thing．
③prefer to do更喜欢做某事．
2．①In addition，②if my parents think my thoughts are reasonable，they'll ③agree with me of course．
①in addition此外，插入语．
②if引导的条件状语从句，遵循主将从现的规则．
③agree with赞同，of course当然．

解答 It's my last winter holiday in junior middle school that seems to be the most precious one．Owing to this，I feel like doing something meaningful．（想怎样度过这个寒假）Reading extra books for three hours every day is the thing that I prefer to do most．【高分句型】（最想做的事情是什么） I think my parents will be in favour of my thought．First and foremost，books are as the"spirit food"in our life．Secondly，as the proverb said，"All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy．"I'm preparing for my essential test indeed，but extra books will give me a clearer mind to study．In addition，if my parents think my thoughts are reasonable，they'll agree with me of course．【高分句型】（你父母会赞成你的想法）That's my last winter holiday in junior middle school．

点评 这是一篇提纲作文．考生在把握了文章的中心后，应在内心构思一个基本的框架，并考虑使用恰当的词语、短语和句型，以充分地表达文章的内容．尽可能地充分利用所学的短语或句型来表述具体的内容，避免使用无把握或偏、难句型．注意所写句子要符合英语的表达习惯．