Question

5．今天是父亲节．假定你是李华，请给你的美国朋友John写一封电子邮件，谈谈你将如何与父亲一起度过这个特别的日子．要点如下：
●介绍下父亲对你的关心爱护；（show love，look after，…）
●为父亲制作一张卡片；（make a card for，…）
●帮助父亲做点家务事；（help，for example，…）
●陪父亲散步等．（take a walk）
●…
注意：1．词数80-100；
2．请不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥；
3．邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数．
Dear John，
It's Father's Day today．It‘s a special day，isn't it？I think we should do something to show our love for our fathers on this special day．My father and I are good friends．Whenever I meet with difficulties，he is always there，ready to help me．
Today I will make a beautiful card for him，with my thanks and best wishes on it．Then I will help him wash the car this afternoon and cook his favorite food in the evening．Besides，I'll take a walk with him after dinner and then play chess with him，for he likes it very much．I'm sure he'll be very happy．
What'your plan for Father's Day？I'm looking forward to hearing from you．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．内容是要求写一封电子邮件，介绍如何与父亲一起度过父亲节．注意邮件的格式．时态主要为一般将来时和一般现在时．人称主要为第一人称和第三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1介绍下父亲对我的关心爱护；（show love，look after，…）
2为父亲制作一张卡片；（make a card for，…）
3帮助父亲做点家务事；（help，for example，…）
4陪父亲散步等．（take a walk）
5其他
常用到的重点短语：
look after照顾
for example例如
take a walk散步
help sb do sth帮助某人做某事
【高分句型】
1．I think ①we should do something ②to show our love for our fathers on this special day．
①省略了that的宾语从句．作为think的宾语．
②动词不定式做目的状语．
2．①Besides，I'll take a walk with him after dinner and then play chess with him，②for he likes it very much．
①besides另外
②for表示因为，引导的原因状语从句．

解答 Dear John，
It's Father's Day today．It's a special day，isn't it？
I think we should do something to show our love for our fathers on this special day．【高分句型】My father and I are good friends．Whenever I meet with difficulties，he is always there，ready to help me．（介绍下父亲对我的关心爱护）
Today I will make a beautiful card for him，with my thanks and best wishes on it．（为父亲制作一张卡片） Then I will help him wash the car this afternoon and cook his favorite food in the evening．（帮助父亲做点家务事）Besides，I'll take a walk with him after dinner and then play chess with him，for he likes it very much．（陪父亲散步和下棋）【高分句型】I'm sure he'll be very happy．
What's your plan for Father's Day？I'm looking forward to hearing from you．
Yours，
Li Hua

点评 这是一篇给材料作文，材料中给的资料比较全面，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥，确定时态主要词汇等问题．结合材料可知本文主要用一般将来时态进行叙述，写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯．适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系．