Question

9．Write at least 60words according to the given situation （根据所给情景写一封不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格．）
•Nowadays many students are busy with their study．They seldom help their parents with housework．What do you think of it？Try to show your opinions and tell your own experience．
•（现在，许多学生忙于学习而很少帮助家长做家务，你是怎么看待这种现象的，请给出自己的观点及自己的经历．）Nowadays many students say they are too busy with their study and they don't have time to help their parents with the housework．I don't think they are true，that's all excuses．
In my opinion，doing some housework such as washing our own clothes and making the bed is our own responsibility．It can also make us independent．We can't depend on others all our life．Sharing the housework is helpful for us to set up good relationship with our parents．I think trying to do some housework can keep us healthy and strong，some hard housework can be regarded as a kind of physical exercise．And we can take care of ourselves better when we grow up．
On weekdays，I often help my parents clean my bed rooms every morning and wash dishes after supper．At weekends，washing clothes and mopping the floor is my duty．And I also help my parents carry something heavy from the supermarket．
As the saying goes'One can't make a big success without being self reliant'，so I think that students should often share the housework in our daily life．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：Nowadays many students say they are too busy with their study and they don't have time to help their parents with the housework．现在很多学生说他们太忙于他们的学习，并且没有时间帮助他们的父母做家务．be busy with…忙于…；have time to do sth．有时间做某事．
高分句型二：Sharing the housework is helpful for us to set up good relationship with our parents．分享家务对于我们和父母建立好的关系是有帮助的．Doing sth．is adj．for sb．to do sth．做某事对于做…是…的．sharing the housework 作句子主语．

解答 Nowadays many students say they are too busy with their study and they don't have time to help their parents with the housework．I don't think they are true，that's all excuses．（开门见山：提出现在许多学生忙于学习而很少帮助家长做家务这种现象，并说出自己的看法，都是借口）
In my opinion，doing some housework such as washing our own clothes and making the bed is our own responsibility．（提出作者的观点，做一些家务事我们的责任）It can also make us independent．We can't depend on others all our life．Sharing the housework is helpful for us to set up good relationship with our parents．I think trying to do some housework can keep us healthy and strong，some hard housework can be regarded as a kind of physical exercise．And we can take care of ourselves better when we grow up．（支撑自己观点的句子）
On weekdays，I often help my parents clean my bed rooms every morning and wash dishes after supper．At weekends，washing clothes and mopping the floor is my duty．And I also help my parents carry something heavy from the supermarket．（自己平常经常做家务）
As the saying goes'One can't make a big success without being self reliant'，so I think that students should often share the housework in our daily life．（用谚语来结尾总结）

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