Question

16．目前中学生早餐问题引起社会关注，你所在学校的学生会就"中学生早餐"问题开展问卷调查，其结果令人担忧．请你根据调查结果写一篇短文，倡导营养早餐．

学生比例	早餐情况	健康状况
55%	有规律地吃早餐	身体健康，精力充沛
25%	吃垃圾食品	营养不均衡
20%	没有吃早餐	感到饥饿，上课无法认真听，容易生病
你的建议：…

提示词：regularly，active，junk food，a balanced diet，as a result，percent（百分比）
要求：
1．所写内容必须包括表格中所提供的信息，并发表自己的看法．
2．所给的提示词可选择使用，也可适当发挥．
3．字数100词左右．文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数．
Breakfast Is Important
Breakfast is important．But not all the students have realized its importance．Here's the result of our survey．About 55percent of the studentshave breakfast regularly every day．They keep healthy and look active.25 percent of them just have junk food instead．They don't have a balanced diet．It is bad for their health． 20 percent of the students go to school without breakfast．As a result，these students often fell hungry in class and can't listen to teachers carefully．What's worse，they get ill easily．
It's necessary/important for us to have breakfast and we should also have the right kinds of food for breakfast．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图表作文．内容是汇报中学生早餐的调查结果，提倡营养早餐．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1.55% 有规律地吃早餐 身体健康，精力充沛
2.25% 吃垃圾食品 营养不均衡
3.20% 没有吃早餐 感到饥饿，上课无法认真听，容易生病
4．你的建议：…
常用到的重点短语：
as a result  作为结果
What's worse  更糟糕的是
keep healthy   保持健康
be bad for 对…不利

【高分句型】
1.25 percent of them just have junk food instead．
instead 代替，常放句末．
2．What's worse，they get ill easily．
What's worse  更糟糕的是
3．①It's necessary/important （for us） to have breakfast ②and we should also have the right kinds of food for breakfast．
①it is+adj+for sb+to do sth对某人来说做某事是怎么样的，it是形式主语，动词不定式做真正主语．
②and连词，连接两个并列成分，这里是连接两个句子．

解答 Breakfast Is Important
    Breakfast is important．But not all the students have realized its important．Here's the result of our survey．About 55 percent of the students have breakfast regularly every day．They keep healthy and look active．（55% 有规律地吃早餐 身体健康，精力充沛 ）25 percent of them just have junk food instead．【高分句型】They don't have a balanced diet．It is bad for their health．（25% 吃垃圾食品 营养不均衡） 20 percent of the students go to school without breakfast．As a result，these students often fell hungry in class and can't listen to teachers carefully．What's worse，they get ill easily．【高分句型】（20% 没有吃早餐 感到饥饿，上课无法认真听，容易生病 ）
    It's necessary/important for us to have breakfast and we should also have the right kinds of food for breakfast．（我的建议）

点评 本题是一篇图表作文，图表作为书面表达的一种信息提示方式，比提纲作文线索显得更简洁明了，写作时也容易区分表达，本题在写作时，要特别注意几种情况的描述，不能逐句翻译，同时要根据提示有效灵活的构思，恰当使用逻辑词语，让文章显得有条理，不杂乱，本文写作内容要根据吃早餐的情况，分析到具体比例和形成的原因．人称要以第三人称．由于是介绍调查结果，也就是平时的情况，应该用一般现在时．