Question

【题目】你正在组织一项暑假期间到山区为期一周的游学和帮扶活动。作为发起人，请你写一篇发言稿，在你校“英语时光”广播中号召更多的同学参加。

要求：

1. 80—100词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。

参考信息：

1. 活动缘由（孤独、帮扶、游学……）

2. 活动构想（时间、地点、内容……）

3. ……

Hello, everybody. I am planning a summer trip called “Be a Kid in the Mountain”. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Thank you!

Answer 1

【答案】Hello, everybody. I am planning a summer trip called “Be a kid in the Mountains”. It will provide us with a meaningful week staying with the students in the mountains.

As many of their parents leave for the city to work, those students might feel lonely and some may even find it hard to go on studying. So we can bring them some school things like books and pens for their study, and prepare some interesting stories to share. In the daytime, we can go hiking and do some teamwork. In the evening, we can do such activities as popular games and group dance around the fire.

Isn’t that exciting? Come and join us. Let’s be “a kid in the mountains”. I believe it will bring sunshine to the children in the mountains as well as more confidence to us.

Thank you!

【解析】

这是一篇发言稿，也就是材料作文，根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下在暑假期间到山区为期一周的游学和帮扶活动的情况。目的是：号召更多的同学参加。主要从活动缘由（孤独、帮扶、游学……）；活动构想（时间、地点、内容……）和其他方面来介绍。时态为一般现在时，人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。

【高分句型一】

As many of their parents leave for the city to work, those students might feel lonely and some may even find it hard to go on studying. 由于很多父母都去城市工作，这些学生可能会感到孤独，有些人甚至觉得很难继续学习。it hard to go on studying.中的it是形式宾语。

【高分句型二】

I believe it will bring sunshine to the children in the mountains as well as more confidence to us. 我相信它会给山里的孩子们带来阳光，也会给我们带来更多的信心。句子it will bring sunshine to the children in the mountains as well as more confidence to us.是宾语从句。做believe的宾语。