Question

假如你是林凡，得知你的朋友郝强生病住院，需要一大笔钱，导致他心情沉重、郁郁寡欢。请根据一下的提示给写一封信,给他一些关心和建议。
要点提示： 1. 学会照顾好自己，保持好良好的精神状态（stay in…）。
2. 多于医生、朋友谈心，从中得到帮助（get help from）。
3. 不要担心钱，因为我们会帮你筹集钱（raise money）。
4. 有空我会去看你，帮你补补课（help…with…）。
5. 希望你能笑对人生（smile at…）早日健康。
写作要求：要点齐全,要适当发挥。词数70个左右。（短文开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数）
Dear Hao Qiang,
I am sorry to hear that you are ill in hospital. I understand your feeling very well. But you know nobody can be happy all the time.
Your sincerely,
Lin Fan.

Answer 1

Dear Hao Qiang,
I am sorry to hear that you are ill in hospital. I understand your feeling very well. But you know nobody can be happy all the time. You should learn to take good care of yourself and stay in a good mood. You can talk to the doctors or your friends when you are upset. Try to get help from them.You must follow the doctor’s advice and take the medicine on time. Don’t worry about money because we can raise money for you. My friend and I will visit when we are free. We can help you with your lesson. I hope you can smile at life and get well soon.
Your sincerely,
Lin Fan

试题分析：这是一篇提纲式的给材料作文。要求给生病的朋友一些建议同时表示你的关心。主要用到一般现在时。
【亮点说明】这篇短文不仅注意避免句式重复而且使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。.如all the time，take good care of， stay in a good mood.等，使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。