Question

上周日，Mary度过了忙碌的一天。请根据下表中Mary周日的行程，写一写Mary在忙的时候，你在做什么？（词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数）

9:00 am	10:00 am	2:00 – 3:00 pm	4:00 pm	7:00 pm
read English	do math homework	have a piano lesson	visit friends	help mom cook dinner

 
At 9:00 , While Mary was reading English , I was listening to the English news on TV .
 
 
 
 

Answer 1

At 9:00 , While Mary was reading English , I was listening to the English news on TV "At 10,while Mary was doing her math homework, I was listening to music. At 2:00 in the afternoon, while Mary was having a piano lesson, I was visiting my grandmother. We went to the farm and fed the chickens. At 4:00 in the afternoon , while Mary was visiting her friends , I was going fishing by the river. It was relaxing. At 7:00 in the afternoon, while Mary was helping her mom cook dinner, I was watching the stars in the sky ,They were beautiful.

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的时态，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
【亮点说明】这篇短文不使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。.如We went to the farm and fed the chickens..等。They were beautiful.等，使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。
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