Question

根据下面的提示以“Amazing animals”为题写一篇短文。词数在80左右。

1.世界上最大的动物不是大象，是蓝鲸（blue whale）；

2.世界上最大的动物在海洋里，但不是鱼；

3.他们很久以前就生活在地球上；

3.它们通常有30米长，重1 000千克。

4.它们是世界上最聪明的动物之一，它们可以相互交谈。当然，我们是听不懂的。

Amazing animals

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Answer 1

Amazing animals

Elephants are not the biggest animals in the world. The world’s biggest animals are in the sea—but not fish. They lived on the earth a long time ago. They’re usually 30 metres long and 1,000 kilos heavy. They’re one of the cleverest animals in the world. They can talk to each other, but people don’t know what they are saying. What are they? They’re called blue whales.

【解析】

试题分析：这里叙述的世界上最大的动物，所以句子应该用一般现在时，人称问题较为复杂，注意主谓一致问题。写作中注意表达的条理性，用好连接词；为丰富文章的文采，可以多用一些复合句。最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误，写好后反复读几遍，适当修改。

【亮点说明】短文用了一些短语和句式，增加了文章的色彩，如：The world’s biggest animals are in the sea—but not fish. They can talk to each other, but people don’t know what they are saying.等，短文还用了一些连词如：but，what等，使句子结构复杂化，注意避免句式的单调重复。

考点：提纲作文。