Question

【题目】学会自我保护是青少年需要具备的一种意识和能力。请根据以下提示，并结合自己的观点，以＂How Can We Protect Ourselves?＂为题，写一篇不少于80词的短文，谈谈在生活中青少年应该怎样自我保护(self-protection)。

提示：1. never swim alone;

2. be careful to make friends;

3. call the police when you are in danger;

4. eat healthy food;

5. don’t crowd(go upstairs and downstairs).

要求：1. 句子结构准确，要点齐全，内容合理，篇章结构连贯；

2. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名、地名。

How Can We Protect Ourselves?

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Answer 1

【答案】How Can We Protect Ourselves?

Self-protection is one of the most important skills for teenagers. But how can we protect ourselves? Here are some of my suggestions.

First, we should be careful when we make friends, especially online. Second, if we are in danger, we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe. Also, we ought to eat healthy. Besides, we shouldn’t crowd each other when we go upstairs and downstairs at school. Last but not least, summer is coming, we must remember it’s dangerous to swim alone.

In short, everyone needs to learn how to protect ourselves and stay away from danger.

【解析】这篇作文要求我们以How can we protect ourselves为题，谈一谈青少年在日常生活中应该如何保护自己。这是一篇话题作文，文章中只给出了写作的题目，而未给出具体的内容，因此首先学生们应结合自己的日常生活，发挥想象力，先列出文章具体内容的提纲，然后根据题纲来组织语言，最后成文。这样的题目是有点难度的，但也一定程度上放开了学生的思维，学生们可以根据自己所想来写作，而不用受到内容的限制。写之前，要注意确定文章应使用的时态和人称，通过分析可知，这篇作文应以第一人称we为主，一般现在时态来叙述。注意谓语动词的正确形式。写作时，应注意英语句式表达习惯和汉语是不同的，以主谓宾和主系表的结构为基础，写出正确的句子，然后为提升文章档次，使用几个较复杂的句型，如复合句、非谓语动词、被动结构等等。还应注意语句之间的连接，使用一些短语、副词等，使整篇文章意思连贯。