Question

15．现在各行各业都在为建设美丽中国而努力奋斗，请你根据下面图示谈谈以下几种职业是怎样做贡献的．作为学生，你又该怎么做？

要求：
1．短文需包含提示要点，并适当发挥；
2．词数：80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
3．文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称．
Now all the Chinese people are making contributions to building beautiful China．      ．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
Doctors are the people ①who can②help patience get out of sickness and pain，they help others to be able to obtain joyfully医生是帮助病人解除病痛的人，他们帮助别人保持快乐．
①who作为关系词的定语从句．修饰前面的people，who做主语．
②help sb do sth帮助某人做某事．
【高分句型二】
These new technologies make our life much easier and better新科技让我们的生活简便的多，好的多．
make …+adj让…怎样

解答 Now all the Chinese people are making contributions to building beautiful China．Doctors are the people who can help patience get out of sickness and pain，they help others to be able to obtain joyfully．【高分句型一】（医生）Policemen protect the community，making it a better place．they help people live without worries，in a safe and peaceful place．（警察）We can't live without rice，so we should thank the farmers，they work hard to grow the rice for us．（农民）21st century is the century of technology．Nowadays，technology is everywhere around us．These new technologies make our life much easier and better．【高分句型二】The scientists invent them．（科学家）
As a student，I think we should be polite to our teachers and classmates and follow the action rules to keep shool yard clean．Work hard to be a useful man，then help to make our country more beautiful．（作为学生我的看法）

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