Question

【题目】短文改错(共10小题；每小题l分，满分10分)

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Almost all of us heard the story "Here Comes the Wolf" when we are little kids. What we can learn from the story is we must be honest. Therefore, there're lots of case of dishonesty nowadays.

Being honest does great harm to other people or to yourself. Take the case of fake milk powder for an example. After drink this kind of milk, the babies had big heads while their legs and arms were still thin, what badly affected their health. To my great relief, the producers got punishing so that more serious consequences could be avoided.

Answer 1

【答案】

Almost all of us heard the story "Here Comes the Wolf" when we little kids. What we can learn from the story is we must be honest. , there're lots of of dishonesty nowadays.

Being does great harm to other people to yourself. Take the case of fake milk powder for an example. After this kind of milk, the babies had big heads while their legs and arms were still thin, badly affected their health. To my great relief, the producers got so that more serious consequences could be avoided.

【解析】

第一处：根据主句的时态以及句子的意思可知，此处用一般过去时态。故are改为were。

第二处：分析句子结构可知，“we must be honest.”在is后面作表语从句，句子成份和意思完整，由that引起，不能省去。故is后加that。

第三处：前后两句是句意的转折。故Therefore改为However。

第四处：case是可数名词，在lots of 后面跟可数名词的复数形式。故case改为cases。

第五处：句意：不诚实对他人和对自己都是有害的。故honest改为dishonest。

第六处：此处并非选择关系，而是并列关系。句意：不诚实对他人和对自己都是有害的。故or改为and。

第七处：for example是固定搭配，是“例如”的意思。故去掉an。

第八处：根据句意可知，在此after是介词，后面跟动名词作宾语。故drink改为drinking。

第九处：本句运用了非限制性定语从句，先行词是主句“the babies had big heads while their legs and arms were still thin”，用which引导，指代主句。故what改为which。

第十处：此处是被动的含义。故punishing改为punished。