Question

【题目】短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

In the past, I always think my little brother was very unpleasant, because he used to ask me some questions every time he did his homeworks. I felt as if I had been the smartest person in the world every time he accepted my explanations. Answered one of his questions, I often liked to say that he was too stupidly to solve such simple questions.

Last week both us received our report cards from our school. Unexpectedly, I got C’s, when he got straight A’s. To make things bad, all the day my brother screamed what foolish it was of me not to ask questions! I just sighed and had to admit that she was right. I have never made a fun of him since then.

Answer 1

【答案】

In the past, I always my little brother was very unpleasant, because he used to ask me some questions every time he did his . I felt as if I had been the smartest person in the world every time he accepted my explanations. one of his questions, I often liked to say that he was too to solve such simple questions.

Last week both us received our report cards from our school. Unexpectedly, I got C’s, he got straight A’s. To make things , all the day my brother screamed foolish it was of me not to ask questions! I just sighed and had to admit that was right. I have never made fun of him since then.

【解析】

第一处：think→ thought In the past是明显的过去时间状语，故think应用一般过去时。

第二处：homeworks→ homework homework（家庭作业）是不可数名词，没有复数形式。

第三处：Answered→ Answering I是answer的逻辑主语，两者间是主动关系，故应使用现在分词Answering作状语。

第四处：stupidly→ stupid 系动词后用形容词作表语，故应改为stupid（愚蠢的）。

第五处：both后加of ＂我们两个人＂ 既可以说we both，也可以说both of us。

第六处：when→ while 上下文之间是对比关系，故应使用while连接并列句。

第七处：bad→ worse to make things worse是固定短语，意为＂更糟糕的是＂ 。

第八处：what→ how foolish是形容词，应用how修饰。hw引出的感叹句作screamed的宾语。

第九处：she→ he 人称代词的逻辑错误。由前面的little brother和he可知应用he。

第十处：去掉a make fun of是固定短语，意为＂取笑＂。