Question

【题目】短文改错（每小题1分，满分10分）

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(/)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

It is common for students to find part-time job. Last summer holiday, I had once worked as a waiter at a restaurant. At first I couldn’t stand the hard work… But with time goes by, I came to realize that I did the meaningful thing. First, I made some money, what allowed me to buy birthday gifts for my friends with asking my parents for money. But I began to learn about the value of money. Besides, I also learned how to get along with other. In a word, the part-time job at the restaurants was great and I got some valuably work experience from it.

Answer 1

【答案】

It is common for students to find part-time job. Last summer holiday, I once worked as a waiter at a restaurant. At first I couldn’t stand the hard work… But with time by, I came to realize that I did meaningful thing. First, I made some money, allowed me to buy birthday gifts for my friends asking my parents for money. I began to learn about the value of money. Besides, I also learned how to get along with . In a word, the part-time job at the was great and I got some work experience from it.

【解析】

第一处：find后加 a 由于job是可数名词，根据句意，它在文章中首次出现，且此处表示泛指，故要用一个不定冠词a。

第二处：once前的had去掉 分析句子，可知本句中有时间状语once，故本句应该用一般过去时。

第三处：goes→going 分析句子，可知此处是with复合结构作状语，此处用go的现在分词形式作宾补。

第四处：the→a 根据文意可知此处表示泛指，故用不定冠词a。

第五处：what→which 分析句子结构可知这是一个非限制性定语从句，从句中缺少主语，根据句意可知先行词是前面整个句子的内容，故用关系代词which。

第六处：with→without 根据对上下文的理解可知本句的意思是这样可以让我不用问父母要钱而买礼物给朋友。故用without。

第七处：But→And 分析句子，根据句意可知此处要用一个表顺承的连词And。

第八处：other→成others others的意思是＂别人，其他人＂，other一般用在名词的前面，意思是＂别的＂。根据句意，故用others。

第九处：restaurants→restaurant 根据句子可知作者只在一家餐厅做兼职，故restaurant用单数形式。

第十处：valuably→valuable 分析句子可知valuably后的work是一个名词，故要用形容词修饰该名词，故valuably改成valuable。