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【题目】短文改错

A little kid fell into the lake while she was playing with her little friends. They were too frightening to know what to do next. Unfortunately, a pretty lady and a man passed by and saw the drowning girl. The man immediate dived into the water and took the girl to the bank and at a same time. The lady called the ambulance on time. Before the ambulance came, the lady, who proved to be a nurse, performing first aid to the kid. A few of minutes later, the kid sent to the nearest hospital and finally saved. The story is a good example where first aid can make a lot of differences. From it, we know it is necessary to know basic first aid skills so that we can be better preparing for an emergency.

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【答案】

A little kid fell into the lake while she was playing with her little friends. They were too to know what to do next. , a pretty lady and a man passed by and saw the drowning girl. The man dived into the water and took the girl to the bank and at same time. The lady called the ambulance time. Before the ambulance came, the lady, who proved to be a nurse, first aid to the kid. A few minutes later, the kid sent to the nearest hospital and finally saved. The story is a good example where first aid can make a lot of . From it, we know it is necessary to know basic first aid skills so that we can be better for an emergency.

【解析】

第一处：frightening→frightened 考查形容词。根据语境，这里是修饰人，指人感到害怕，所以应用frightened。。

第二处：Unfortunately→Fortunately 逻辑关系错误。根据语境，这里是说＂幸运的是＂，所以应用Fortunately。

第三处：immediate→immediately 考查副词。修饰动词应用副词，故用immediately。

第四处：a→the 固定搭配错误。at the same time ＂同时＂，故a改为the。

第五处：on→in 固定搭配错误。根据语境，应该是及时叫了救护车。in time ＂及时＂，故on改为in。

第六处：performing→performed 谓语动词的错误。perform 作的是主句的谓语，根据语境应用过去时，故performing改为performed。

第七处：去掉A few 后的of 固定搭配错误。a few 意为＂几个＂，修饰可数名词复数，故去掉of。

第八处：sent 前加was 语态错误。根据句意，这个孩子被送往最近的医院，send与主语为被动关系，应用被动语态，且此处为过去发生的事情，故在sent前加was。

第九处：differences→difference 名词错误。make a lot of difference 意为＂有很大影响，意义重大＂。

第十处：preparing→prepared 非谓语动词错误。be well prepared for ＂为……做好准备＂，故preparing改为prepared。