Question

【题目】短文改错

下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

As the development of modern science and technology, more and more electric cars are coming into our lives and become popular.

Electric cars have many advantages. Firstly, they are energy-saved and environmental friendly. They don’t pollute the air because they use electricity to take place of petrol. Secondly, it is easy or safe to drive electric cars. In addition, they make much noise when they are running. Last but not least, electric cars can go on a speed of 120 kilometers an hour.

In my opinion, our government should take measure to support the production of electric cars and encourage people to using them. If possible, people should use electric cars in order to make our world clean and better in the future.

Answer 1

【答案】

As the development of modern science and technology, more and more electric cars are coming into our lives

With

and become popular.

becoming

Electric cars have many advantages. Firstly, they are energy-saved and environmentally friendly. They don’t

energy-saving

pollute the air because they use electricity to take ∧place of petrol. Secondly, it is easy or safe to drive electric

the and

cars. In addition, they make much noise when they are running. Last but not least, electric cars can go on a speed of

little at

120 kilometers an hour.

In my opinion, our government should take measure to support the production of electric cars and encourage

measures

people to use them. If possible, people should use electric cars in order that to make our world clean and better in

cleaner

the future.

【1】As→ With

【2】become→ becoming

【3】energy-saved→ energy-saving

【4】take后面加the

【5】or→ and

【6】much→ little

【7】on→ at

【8】measure→ measures

【9】去掉that

【10】clean→ cleaner

【解析】

【1】As→ With 考查介词搭配。with the development of＂随着……的发展＂。with（介词）后面跟名词（短语），as（连词）后面接句子。

【2】become→ becoming 考查时态。and前后为并列结构，形式上要保持一致，前面用了coming，故此处用becoming。

【3】energy-saved→ energy-saving 考查形容词。＂节能的＂要用energy-saving来表示。

【4】take后面加the 考查固定搭配。take the place of＂代替，取代＂。

【5】or→ and 考查连词。easy和safe之间为并列关系，此处表示＂既……又……＂，不表示选择，故把or改成and。

【6】much→ little 考查形容词。第二段是在介绍电动汽车的优点，电动汽车在行使时发出的噪音很小，发出的噪音很大就不是优点了。

【7】on→ at 考查介词搭配。at a speed of＂以……的速度＂。

【8】measure→ measures 考查固定搭配。take measures to do sth.＂采取措施做某事＂。

【9】去掉that in order that后接从句，in order to后接动词原形。根据后面的make our world…可知that多余。

【10】clean→ cleaner 考查形容词比较级。and连接的并列成分在形式上要保持一致，根据better可知这里用比较级cleaner。