Question

【题目】假设你是李华。英语口语课上，老师要求大家各自描述一下自己想象中的大学生活。请结合以下同学的观点，写一篇100词左右的英语短文谈谈你对大学生活的认识。

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Answer 1

【答案】College life will be one of the most important stages in my life. I think my life in college will be more colorful and interesting than it is now. I can have free time to take part in some interesting clubs and activities, such as sports and theatre activities. Of course, there are maths clubs and science clubs as well. I may have many classmates from all over the country. I will have new friendships with them. Surely, managing my major subjects will be my main goal in my college life. Meanwhile, I want to take some online classes to increase my knowledge and broaden my horizons.

I will plan my college life based on what I hope to do after graduation. I believe that my college life will be interesting and meaningful.

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于话题类作文。

第1步：根据提示可知，文章要求假设你是李华。英语口语课上，老师要求大家各自描述一下自己想象中的大学生活。请结合以下同学的观点，写一篇100词左右的英语短文谈谈你对大学生活的认识。时态应为一般将来时。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：stage阶段，colorful多彩的，take part in参加，such as例如，as well也，friendship友谊，main goal主要的目标，Meanwhile同时，online classes网上课程，broaden one’s horizons拓宽某人的视野，based on以…为基础。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

亮点说明：作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如：I think my life in college will be more colorful and interesting than it is now.宾语从句的运用；I believe that my college life will be interesting and meaningful. 宾语从句的运用。本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。