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IV. 写作(共两节，满分40分)
第一节：基础写作（满分15分）
[写作内容]
请根据以下的情景说明，使用5个规范的句子描述全部所给的信息内容。
假设你是一名导游，将带团到广东霞山。出发前你对美国游客们简单介绍
当天的行程和其他事项。
(1)、霞山位于广东北部，距广州280公里，乘车6小时；
(2)、在韶关市停留一小时，吃午饭；
(3)、下午5点到南雄，晚宿南雄宾馆，第二天去游玩霞山；
(4)、路途遥远，艰难，但沿途你会介绍美景和趣闻让游客忘记疲劳。
[写作要求]
(1)只能使用5个句子介绍以上全部内容；       (2)短文的开头已为你写好。
[评分标准］句子结构的准确性和复杂度；信息内容的完整性和连贯性。Ladies and gentlemen,
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Ladies and gentlemen,
Xia Mountains, about 280 kilometers away from Guangzhou, is located in the north of Guangdong Province. It will take us 6 hours to get there. At noon, stopping in Shaoguan City for an hour to have our lunch, we will reach another city — Nanxiong at 5 o’clock in the afternoon and for the night there, and, by the way, we will climb Xixia Mountains next morning.
Although the trip to Xia Mountains is a bit long and difficult, the beautiful scenery and interesting things on the way will catch you eyes and help get rid of your tiredness. Besides, from time to time, I’ll give you a brief account of Xia Mountains.

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