Question

10．实现有效的沟通，建立良好的人际关系，不仅要善于言表，更要学会倾听．请你叙述倾听的重要性，并说明你的理由．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：
As we all know，being a good listener①plays an important role in②making effective communication and establishing good relationship among people．
众所周知，做一名优秀的倾听者在进行有效的沟通和建立良好的人际关系方面起着很重要的作用．
①being a good listener为动名词形式作主语．
②play an important role in doing sth．意为：在（做）某事方面发挥着重要的作用．
句型二：
In addition①，eye contact is necessary，but you remember neither to make too much nor ②too little，or ③it may cause misunderstanding．
此外，眼神的交流也很有必要，但你要记住既不要有太多也不要有太少，否则会引起误会．
①In addition意为：另外，此外．
②neither…nor…意为：既不…，也不…
③连词or表示一种否定的条件，意为"否则"．

解答 Being a Good Listener
    As we all know，being a good listener plays an important role in making effective communication and establishing good relationship among people．【高分句型一】（总述倾听的重要性）The reason is that while listening attentively to others，your respect can be felt by the speaker．Besides，you understand what is being said better and the conversation will go more smoothly．（说明认为倾听很重要的理由）If parents are willing to listen carefully to what their children are saying，generation gap is sure to be narrowed．If teachers like to listen to their students，they will find it easier to tailor their teaching to the students'needs．If the students are patient enough to listen to each other，not only will the friendship be promoted，but they can also learn from each other，thus making up for their own disadvantages．（举例说明倾听的好处）
    Being a good listener is more than listening with head nodding．From my perspective，you should pay attention to the speaker's body language，for it presents the speaker's feeling and emotions．In addition，eye contact is necessary，but you remember neither to make too much nor too little，or it may cause misunderstanding．【高分句型二】（介绍做一名优秀的聆听者的表现．）
    In short，being a good listener is very important，which can never be stressed too much．Therefore，be a good listener from now on!That's all for my personal opinion．（与第一段相呼应，重申自己的观点）

点评 写开放类作文时，首先应明确写作的主题，写作时结构及内容要条理清晰，上下文衔接要合理；其次应注意选取相应的句式结构以及短语，注意时态及人称的正确使用．