Question

 假如你是李华，最近你在浏览一个新西兰中学网站时，看到一位名叫Tom的中学生的留言，他计划在暑假期间到中国的北京旅游，希望能有一名中国留学生做他的导游。你对此很感兴趣，请根据以下要点提示写一封e-mail给他，介绍你的相关情况。

  主要内容包括 ：

1．希望做他的导游；               2．打算如何给他做导游；               3．期盼他的回复。

  注意：

1. 词数100左右；           2. 可适当增加情节，以使行文连贯；3. 信的开头已为你写好。

Dear Tom,

  Recently, while browsing a senior high school website of New Zealand, I saw the message you posted on it.

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Yours sincerely,

                                                                       Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

One possible version:

Dear Tom,

Recently, while browsing a senior high school website of New Zealand, I saw the message you posted on it. I get to know your wishes that you intend to travel in Beijing during the summer vacation with a Chinese student as your guide.

Learning this news, I am really willing to travel with you and introduce Beijing to you. I know as a brilliant guide I am supposed to make your journey interesting and meaningful. For one thing, I will keep you company visiting numerous great places of interest and enjoy the wonderful sightseeing. For another, I am going to tell you the long and rich history of Beijing.

I am looking forward to the reply from you. With all my wishes you could give me this honor.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本文根据要求和内容来看，包括：1.希望做他的导游；2.打算如何给他做导游；3.期盼他的回复。要用不同的时态表述。应用第一人称的语气表达。还应该注意使用较高级的词汇和句子的衔接，以提高作文的档次。字数要求100词左右。

【亮点说明】文章结构清楚，层次明确。使用了For one thing，For another,来说明自己做导游的优势。另外用了am supposed to，keep doing，还运用了-ing形式作状语，looking forward to；定语从句、同位语从句等短语和较为复杂的表达。

考点：提纲作文。