Question

20．假设你是王林，寒假期间你要到伦敦旅游，请你根据以下提示给你的英国好友Alex写一封信，请他推荐一个旅馆，要点如下：
1 介绍你伦敦之行的目的；
2 停留时间：5个晚上，从2月8日到12日；
3 房间要求：预定一个房间，旅馆要靠近公共汽车站；有独立浴室；可以上网；
注意：词数100左右；可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Alex，
How is everything going recently？I am writing to you in the hope that you can recommend a hotel to me．（高分句型一）
To experienc e different cultures and broaden my horizons，I will visit London during the winter holiday．（高分句型二）When I am staying there，I want a single room with a private bathroom for five nights，from Feb 8 to Feb 12．I hope that the hotel you recommend to me should be located near the bus station so that I can take a bus conveniently．In addition，to keep in touch with my family and friends，I hope I can gain access to the internet in the room．（高分句型三）
I would appreciate it if you could help me．I am looking forward to your early reply．
Yours sincerely；
Wang Lin．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲类书面表达，文章的要点基本上都给出来了，而且很具体，考生要把要点解释清楚，不能有遗漏．在表达要点时，要注意条理清楚，层次分明．在写作的过程中，要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，如强调句，倒装句等，让文章更上档次．同时在列举要求的时候要使用合适的连接词，让文章看起来很有条理，也很流畅．本篇文章在写作时不要啰嗦，力求简洁．
【亮点说明】所给范文语言简洁，运用了一些高级词汇：recommend sth to sb给某人推荐…，keep in touch with联系，gain access to the internet上网．运用了固定句型：I would appreciate it if…如果…我将感激不尽；I am looking forward to your early reply．期待您早日回复．范文中的句式多变，运用了不同的语法知识：To experience different cultures and broaden my horizons运用了动词不定式作目的状语；so that I can take a bus conveniently用了so that引导目的状语从句；I hope that the hotel you recommend to me should be located near the bus station这句话在宾语从句里又套用了定语从句．范文中还用了连接副词in addition"另外；并且"，使文章更加通顺．
I am writing to you in the hope that you can recommend a hotel to me．（高分句型一）
To experienc e different cultures and broaden my horizons，I will visit London during the winter holiday．（高分句型二）
In addition，to keep in touch with my family and friends，I hope I can gain access to the internet in the room．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Alex，
      How is everything going recently？I am writing to you in the hope that you can recommend a hotel to me．（高分句型一）
      To experienc e different cultures and broaden my horizons，I will visit London during the winter holiday．（高分句型二）When I am staying there，I want a single room with a private bathroom for five nights，from Feb 8 to Feb 12．I hope that the hotel you recommend to me should be located near the bus station so that I can take a bus conveniently．In addition，to keep in touch with my family and friends，I hope I can gain access to the internet in the room．（高分句型三）
      I would appreciate it if you could help me．I am looking forward to your early reply．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                       Yours，sincerely
                                                                                                                                                                                                                            Wang Lin

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．