Question

5．请写一篇短文，阐述水在人们生活及工业中的重要性．
（1）没有水，人与动物怎么办？
（2）缺水问题越来越严重．原因是人口增长；工、农业发展；污染．
（3）应采取措施，解决缺水问题；充分利用；避免污染；净化雨水或海水．
词数：100左右
生词：净化purify；缺水water shortage；污染pollute；采取措施take measures
Lately，the importance of water and the water shortage problem have become a hot issue．It's generally believed that humans should pay much attention to the water problem（高分句型一）．开门见山，提出问题
Water is very important to living things．Without water，there would be no life on earth．All animals and plants need water．Man also needs water．
Recently，as the population of the world is growing rapidly，using much water is a must．The development of agriculture and industry leads to water pollution．Thus，how to solve such a serious problem is indeed worth paying more attention（高分句型二）．
As a saying goes，small actions make a big difference．It's high time that we should take some effective and immediate measures to solve it（高分句型三）．First，raising the public awareness plays an important role in solving the problem．Besides，we should make good use of water and prevent water from being polluted．Meanwhile，we can purify rainwater and sea water（需要采取的措施）．
It's better late than never．Faced with the water problem，we should work together to protect our water resource and save every drop of water．发出倡议．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提纲作文．根据所提供的材料信息，写一篇短文，阐述水在人们生活中的重要性以及如何解决缺水问题．写作要点包括：1、没有水，人与动物怎么办？2、缺水问题越来越严重．原因是人口增长；工、农业发展；污染．3、应采取措施，解决缺水问题；充分利用；避免污染；净化雨水或海水．写作时人称以第一和第三人称为主，时态以一般现在时为主．
重点词汇：hot issue（热点问题）；pay attention to （注意）；lead to（导致）；be worth doing（值得做…）；take measures（采取措施）；play an important role（骑着重要作用）；make good use of （充分利用）
高分句型：1．It's generally believed that humans should pay much attention to the water problem．
                 在这个固定句型中，it作形式主语，真正的主语是后面的that从句．
                 2．Thus，how to solve such a serious problem is indeed worth paying more attention．
                  how to solve such a serious problem 是一个主语从句，作句子的主语．
                 3．It's high time that we should take some effective and immediate measures to solve it．
                  It's high time that…句型，意为（是时候…），that从句用虚拟语气"should+动词原形"．

解答 Lately，the importance of water and the water shortage problem have become a hot issue．It's generally believed that humans should pay much attention to the water problem（高分句型一）．开门见山，提出问题
      Water is very important to living things．Without water，there would be no life on earth．All animals and plants need water．Man also needs water．
      Recently，as the population of the world is growing rapidly，using much water is a must．The development of agriculture and industry leads to water pollution．Thus，how to solve such a serious problem is indeed worth paying more attention（高分句型二）．
       As a saying goes，small actions make a big difference．It's high time that we should take some effective and immediate measures to solve it（高分句型三）．First，raising the public awareness plays an important role in solving the problem．Besides，we should make good use of water and prevent water from being polluted．Meanwhile，we can purify rainwater and sea water（需要采取的措施）．
      It's better late than never．Faced with the water problem，we should work together to protect our water resource and save every drop of water．发出倡议

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．