Question

假设你是高一学生李越，经过三个月的高中学习给你的初中老师Mr Wang 写一封信，包括以下内容：
1. 你在高中的生活（跟同学相处…;学习…）
2. 感谢他过去三年对你的关心与帮助  
3. 你的理想
注意： 1. 短文需包括以上要点，可适当增添细节，使行文连贯；
2. 文中不能出现真实的人名、班名等个人信息；
3. 词数100-120 左右。 开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。

Answer 1

Dear Mr Wang,
How are you?
Now I’m in high school. I am getting on well with my new classmates and I feel happy to be friends with all of my classmates. We help each other with the studies. I have made great progress though I’m still weak in math. I believe that it won’t be long before I study it well. I’m very grateful to you for your care and help. I’ll never forget the time when you taught me patiently, cared about my study and health and encouraged me to face challenges bravely. It was you who offered help to me whenever it was needed. By the way, I want to share my dream with you. I want to be a professor in the future. No dream is easy to achieve, so I will study harder and harder. I believe strongly that the future is up to myself to create!
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Yue

解析试题分析：本文属于应用文中的书信，3个要点都已经给出，考生只需要进行拓展，可以适当增加细节，是文章更有特色。注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，如倒装句强调句等，使用合适的连接词如though， By the way等让文章更流畅，更有文采。
考点：考查应用文中的书信
点评：书信的写作首先注意格式，要点要全，不能有任何的遗漏，写作的三大要素：连接词，高级词汇短语及高级句型都要在文章中有所体现。