Question

有一个美国代表团想了解你们的英语老师Mr. Moon，请根据下列提要，写一篇以＂My Teacher Mr. Moon”短文。
[写作内容]
1.出生于法国，华籍美国人，40岁，活泼，具有幽默感。
2.与其他教师相比，他更注重教学方法，总想尽各种方法让他的课生动有趣。
3.鼓励学生思考，培养学生自学能力。
4.帮助学生学会了分析和解决问题。
5.博学，深受学生爱戴。
[写作要求]
只能用5个句子表达全部内容
[评分标准]
句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯。

Answer 1

My Teacher Mr. Moon
Born in France and aged 40, Mr. Moon, an American Chinese, is a lovely teacher with a sense of humor. Compared with other teachers, Mr. Moon pays more attention to his ways of teaching, trying various ways to make his classes lively and interesting. In class he always encourages us to think hard and develop our ability to study on our own. With his help, we’ve learned how to analyze and solve problems. He is such a learned person that we all admire him very much.

试题分析：这是一篇对人物描写的文章，要点已给出，首先把每个要点翻译出来，然后把句子组成文章，使用合适的连词或承接词使句子之间具有连贯性，使文章读起来很丰满。注意句子形式要多样，用词要准确。严格按照写作要求写作。
点评：写作时首先要仔细审题，此题要点已给出，写作时要点一定要全，句子要连贯，此题的要求很特殊，只能用5个句子，所以一定要严格按写作要求写。