Question

高三学生面临着沉重的学习压力，很多学生利用课间十分钟的休息时间学习,实际上没有什么效果。假如你是新华中学高三年级的学生李立，就此现象给中学生英语报写封信，发表自己的看法。信的内容须包括以下要点：
1．十分钟的课间休息很有必要（说明理由）； 2．你是怎样利用这十分钟的。
注意：1、词数100左右； 2、信的开头已经给出（不计入总数）。
Dear Editor,
I’m a Senior 3 student from Xinhua Middle School. ________________________
Sincerely yours
Li li

Answer 1

Dear Editor,
I’m a Senior 3 student from Xinhua Middle School. As is known to all, senior 3 students are suffering heavy pressure of study. As a result, many students are trying to spare every minute to study, even during the ten-minute break between classes.
In my opinion, taking the ten-minute break between classes is definitely necessary, which makes us relaxed both physically and mentally. The ten-minute break is meant for us to relax and prepare for the next class. Only by doing so can we have more energy to study effectively in class.
My ten-minute break is always pleasing as well as relaxing. Sometimes I do some simple exercises. Sometimes I have a free chat with my classmates or just take walk a outside. Therefore, I always feel energetic and listen attentively in class.
Sincerely yours
Li li

试题分析：本文属于议论文体，提出一个主题，对这个主题展开讨论。对于这类文体宜采用三段式文章，第一段首先对存在的现象进行描述，提出问题；第二段对存在的现象发表自己的看法，中间需要运用上表起承转合的连词、定语从句、倒装等语法现象使文章富有深度、句式多变；第三段结合自身的情况，对现象陈述自己是如何做的，这样从自己的做法中，更进一步的表明自己的观点，说明这样做的益处，从而是文章升华。
点评：书面表达是最能体现一个学生的语言运用能力和英语思维理解的题目，对于作文的提高需要学生平时在练习过程中，对于写错或是不知道表达的一定要多问老师，同时还应该多进行阅读，对阅读过程中写的好的表达要进行积累，并且学以致用，勤积累，多背诵，这样才能作文才能稳步的提升。