Question

9．请你根据以下通知的内容，以学生会的名义写一则书面通知．

通知  活动目的：进一步提高全校师生的应急疏散能力、自我保护能力和安全意识 指挥者：校长 活动地点：学校操场 演练时间：2014 年 11 月 8 日下午 3：30 参加人员：全校师生 注意事项：1．服从引导员的指挥 2．各班按次序撤离 3．保持镇静，不能发生挤、踏、踩等事故 4．安全第一 学生会 2014 年 11 月 7 日

注意：1．通知要包括以上提供的所有内容要点，可以适当增加细节，使内容连贯．
2．词数：100 左右（开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数）
3．参考词汇：疏散演练：evacuation exercise引导员：guide

NOTICE
Earthquakes are one of the most dangerous among all natural disasters．In order to help both teachers and students deal with emergencies and save themselves in case the earthquake breaks out，an evacuation exercise will be held on the playground in our school at 3：30 p．m．on November 8，2014．（高分句型一） The activity will be commanded by our headmaster．The evacuation exercise is mainly about how to survive an earthquake．We must do as follows．Firstly，everyone must obey the guide's command．Secondly，everyone shall leave the classrooms in order when the alarm clock goes off．Above all，we must keep calm during the evacuation exercise，avoiding pushing and stepping on each other．（高分句型二）
Everyone is required to be present on time，making adequate preparations for the earthquake emergencies．（高分句型三）Nothing is more important than safety．Safety first!
Students'Union November 7，2014．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息请你根据以下通知的内容，以学生会的名义写一则书面通知，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，要点包括：活动目的，活动地点，演练时间，参加人员等  2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：In order to以便，为了；deal with应对，处理；in case 以防，万一；break out爆发；Above all最重要的是；make adequate preparations for做好充分准备；
In order to help both teachers and students deal with emergencies and save themselves in case the earthquake breaks out，an evacuation exercise will be held on the playground in our school at 3：30 p．m．on November 8，2014．（高分句型一）
Above all，we must keep calm during the evacuation exercise，avoiding pushing and stepping on each other．（高分句型二）
Everyone is required to be present on time，making adequate preparations for the earthquake emergencies．（高分句型三）

解答 NOTICE
       Earthquakes are one of the most dangerous among all natural disasters．In order to help both teachers and students deal with emergencies and save themselves in case the earthquake breaks out，an evacuation exercise will be held on the playground in our school at 3：30 p．m．on November 8，2014．（高分句型一） The activity will be commanded by our headmaster．The evacuation exercise is mainly about how to survive an earthquake．We must do as follows． Firstly，everyone must obey the guide's command．Secondly，everyone shall leave the classrooms in order when the alarm clock goes off．Above all，we must keep calm during the evacuation exercise，avoiding pushing and stepping on each other．（高分句型二）
       Everyone is required to be present on time，making adequate preparations for the earthquake emergencies．（高分句型三）Nothing is more important than safety．Safety first!
                                                                                                                                                                                            Students'Union
                                                                                                                                                                                     November 7，2014

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．