Question

5．下文中共有10处语言错误．请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个词．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（　　），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（　　）划掉．
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每句不超过两个错误．
      2．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词．
      3．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．

    The other day，my friends and I talked to the rules that we have in school．At our school，we had to wear the school uniforms every day，or the problem is that all my classmates feel the uniforms are ugly．We think that young people should look like smart and you would like to wear our own clothes．Our teachers believe that if we do it，we will concentrate much on our clothes than our studies．But we disagree．We will feel more comfortably if we wear our own clothes．If we can't do it，we should be allowing to design our own uniforms．That could be good solution to this problems．

Answer 1

分析 作者在短文中发表了对学校要求学生每天穿校服的看法．绝大多数学生都认为校服不好看，还是穿自己的服装更舒服一些，但老师确认为那样会影响学习．作者认为
如果非要穿校服的话，那就应该让学生自己设计自己的校服，这将会是一个好的解决办法．

解答 The other day，my friends and I talked to the rules that we have in school．At our school，we  had to wear the school uniforms every day，or the problem is that
                                                       about                                                                            have                                                          and
all my classmates feel the uniforms are ugly．We think that young people should look likesmart and youwould like to wear our own clothes．Our teachers believe
                                                                                                                         去掉like                we
that if we do it，we will concentrate muchon our clothes than our studies．But we disagree．We will feel more comfortably if we wear our own clothes．If we can'
                                                      more                                                                                                      comfortable
do it，we should be allowingto design our own uniforms．That could be good∧solution to this problems．
                               allowed                                                                        a                          problem
1．to改为about；
2．had改为have；考查时态，结合上下文语境，这句讲的是"我们"平时在学校的一种习惯性行为，所以要用一般现在时．
3．or改为but；考查连词，这里用but表示转折，句意为"我们不得不每天都穿校服，但问题是同学们都觉得校服很难看"．
4．去掉like；考查动词，look like 中，like是介词，后跟名词或名词性短语，这里like用作系动词"看起来.."，后跟形容词做表语．
5．you改为we；考查物主代词，根据句意，这里主语应与前句的主语保持一致，故用we．
6．much改为more；考查比较级，本句是典型的比较级结构more…than…
7．comfortably改为comfortable；考查形容词，这里句子中的feel用作系动词，后面跟形容词构成系表结构．
8．allowing改为allowed；考查语态，这里主语we和谓语动词allow之间应当是被动关系，所以用被动语态．
9．solution前面加a；考查冠词，solution是可数名词，前加a表示"一个方法"．
10．problems改为problem；考查名词，这里有指示代词this，所以要用单数．

点评 通过快速阅读短文了解短文的基本大意，再分析句子间的结构关系，从词义，词性，固定短语，句式结构等方面去找文中存在的错误加以修改．