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17．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的一下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（　　），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用"\"删掉．
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分．
Today is my Mom's birthday．
This afternoon，I went to the biggest shopping center downtown，and bought the present for her．Then I took the subway home．Sitting on the train，I thought my mum will be very happy when he saw the present．
At the next station，an old man，whom carried two heavy bag，got on the train and stood in front of me．He looked tiring．I hesitated for a moment，and then offered my seat to him．The old man thanked me for a lot and sat down．Seen his smile，I felt happily．
From this experience，I will ready to help others in the future．

分析本文作者主要讲述了在给母亲买生日礼物回来的地铁上，自己主动给一位老人让座的故事．在作者母亲过生日的那天下午，作者去了市中心最大的购物中心，为母亲购买了礼物．当他坐上地铁回家的时候，看到在他的前面，站着一位提着两个很重袋子的老人，老人看上去很累；作者犹豫了一会儿后，便将座位让给了他；看着老人的微笑，作者很高兴，并且决定今后将继续帮助别人．

解答 Today is my Mom's birthday．
This afternoon，I went to the biggest shopping center downtown，and bought thepresent
                                                                                                                    a
for her．Then I took the subway home．Sitting on the train，I thought my mum will be
                                                                                                                    would
very happy when hesaw the present．
                       she
At the next station，an old man，whom carried two heavybag，got on the train and stood
                                                  who                             bags
in front of me．He looked tiring．I hesitated for a moment，and then offered my seat to
                                        tired
him．The old man thanked me for a lot and sat down．Seen his smile，I felt happily．
                                        去掉for                             Seeing                       happy
From this experience，I will∧ready to help others in the future．
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1．将the改成a       考查冠词的用法    此处用在单数名词present之前，表示泛指"一件礼物"；故用a
2．将 will改为would      考查时态   本句是宾语从句，由于主句使用了一般过去时，从句应使用过去的某种形式；根据句意"我想当妈妈看到礼物的时候，会很高兴"可知，此处表示过去将要发生的动作；故用过去将来时
3．将he改为she    考查人称代词的用法    根据上文可知，此处指的是妈妈看到礼物会很开心，故改为she
4．将whom改成who     考查关系代词在非限制性定语从句中的用法     根据句意以及空缺处之前的逗号可知，本句是非限制性定语从句；先行词an old man（指人），在从句中作主语，故将作宾语的关系代词whom改为它的主格形式who
5．将bag改成bags     考查名词的单复数    此处指的是：两个很重的包；bag为可数名词，故用其复数形式bags
6．将tiring改成tired      考查形容词的用法     本句的意思是：他看来很疲倦；由于此处的形容词用来说明主语He（指人）的状态，故用由过去分词转化来的形容词tired
7．去掉for       考查固定表达      thank sb．for sth．意为"因为某事感谢某人"；thank sb．a lot"多谢某人"；a lot表示程度，修饰thanked；故去掉for
8．将Seen改成Seeing       考查现在动词的用法      此处在句中作原因状语，动词see与其逻辑主语I之间为主谓关系，故用现在分词Seeing
9．将happily改为happy      考查形容词的用法    feel为系动词，后面应接形容词作表语；故改为happy
10．will后面加be     考查形容词的用法    形容词用在句中作表语时，它的前面应加系动词；由于will后面应使用动词原形，ready是形容词，故在will后面加be

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