Question

当前，“酒后驾车”成了人们热议的话题。请你根据以下提示对“酒后驾车”谈谈个人看法：
1．“酒后驾车”的危害。如：引发交通事故，造成交通阻塞，构成生命危险，
造成财产损失等。
2．你的建议。
注意：1．词数100词左右；  
2．开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Nowadays, drinking and driving is becoming a heated topic among people in China. Here, I’d like to air my views about it.
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Answer 1

Nowadays, drinking and driving is becoming a heated topic among people in China. Here, I’d like to air my views about it.
As is known to us all, drinking and driving is a sort of terrible behavior that will threaten the safety of people, including the driver himself. Many of the traffic accidents caused by drinking and driving have brought about traffic jams, injuries and even death. Besides, a great deal of money has to be spent treating the injured and repairing the broken cars, which means a waste of money.
I strongly suggest effective measures be taken before things get worse. Laws and regulations should be strengthened to punish those performing drinking and driving. Meanwhile, the public, especially drivers, should be more aware of public safety. I hope by doing so, drinking and driving can be things of past.

试题分析：本文是篇材料作文，材料非常简单，学生很容易把握写作要求和写作目的。考生在写作之前必修认真审题，首先要注意文章的时态，要求是对酒后驾驶的现象，所以要用一般现在时。要求叙述现状并写出自己的建议，因此本文必须用第一人称。再有就是不能根据材料逐字逐句的翻译应该注意句子的衔接，以提高作文的档次。
【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如a heated topic，As is known to us all, including，be aware of 等，还运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句等等。并注意了句子的衔接如：Meanwhile, besides等等。