Question

英语课上,老师要求同桌同学相互修改作文。假设以下小作文为你同桌所写，请你对其进行修改。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
3．必须按答题要求做题，否则不给分。
My grandmother is a village woman. She is already in her seventy. Although she received little school education, but she is aware that knowledge is of great important to young people. When my father was young, my grandmother took good care him so that my father could cost more time on his studies. Now, she often encouraged me to study hard. This summer she was bad ill in bed. When I visited her during the summer holiday, I found her sitting in bed, made new shoes for me! I was so deeply moving that tears came to my eyes. My grandmother is so a kind and hardworking woman. I’ll respect and love her forever.

Answer 1

【小题1】seventy-----seventies
【小题2】but去掉
【小题3】important­----importance
【小题4】took good care^ of
【小题5】cost----spend
【小题6】encouraged--- encourages
【小题7】bad---badly
【小题8】made---making
【小题9】moving---moved
【小题10】so---such

解析试题分析：文章介绍作者的奶奶，虽然她没有接受过什么教育，但是她知道教育的重要性。
【小题1】在某人几十岁的时候：in one’s+数字的复数：seventy-----seventies
【小题2】虽然她没有接受过什么教育，但是她知道教育的重要性。Although不能和but连用
【小题3】be of+抽象名词=形容词：important­----importance
【小题4】爸爸小的时候，奶奶照顾他。took good care  of照料
【小题5】某人花时间做…，sb spend time to do sth. cost----spend
【小题6】现在她鼓励我努力学习。时间是now，用一般现在时：encouraged--- encourages
【小题7】今年夏天她病得很重。用副词-badly修饰ill
【小题8】我发现她坐在床上，帮我做鞋子。用现在分词做伴随状语：made---making
【小题9】我被感动的流泪了。形容人用-moved
【小题10】我奶奶是如此善良和勤奋的人。So修饰形容词或副词，such修饰名词woman，
考点：考查短文改错