Question

假设你是李华，你班同学李阳和赵民发生争吵，关系很紧张。原因是李阳晚上在寝室打手机，赵民觉得这影响了他的休息。请你结合此事，并根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文，向学校英文报“Happy Teens”专栏投稿。

简要描述事情经过	在寝室打手机，影响休息
分析冲突原因	遇事不冷静 ..........
谈一下避免冲突办法	根据自己经历感想，提出至少两种

1、词数100左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。
2、作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
Conflicts with others are common in everyday life. ____________________________________
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Answer 1

Conflicts with others are common in everyday life. Last Sunday evening, Zhao Min was sleeping soundly when suddenly Li Yang’s mobile-phone rang. Li Yang answered it but he spoke so loudly that Zhao Min was waked up. So he complained to Li Yang angrily about the noise. As a result, it turned into a horrible quarrel.
To be honest, it was Li Yang’s fault because he shouldn’t have used his mobile-phone in the dorm but Zhao Min was also to blame — they were not calm enough and both said some really mean things.  
Instead of blaming each other, we should communicate more and put ourselves in others’ place.

试题分析：考查提纲类作文的写作。话题是李阳和赵民，要点是以提纲的形式表示的，包括描述事情经过，分析原因，和解决办法，要适当增加细节，不能只是把要点翻译成英语、，注意改变文章的样式。不能写成提纲式，难度在于选择合适的词汇和句型表达文章需要的意思，可以变换使用一些容易驾驭的句子或者词汇实现同样的目的。Li Yang answered it but he spoke so loudly that Zhao Min was waked up.这句话用了so that句型，  To avoid such conflict，we should be kind to one another, which is of importance to enjoy a harmonious life in the dorm.这句话是非限制性定语从句，还要使用合适的连接词来连接各要点，使文章成为一个整体。To be honest, As a result,等
点评：提纲类作文的关键在于表达方式的选择和要点的完备，不能有遗漏或者省略。因为本文的要求是不能写出提纲式，所以在写作的时候要变换句式，不能一个句式一成不变，要给读者新鲜的感觉。