Question

假设你是高中生李明，有感于校园中存在随意涂写（to scribble）和乱丢垃圾（ to litter）的行为，请用英语给校长写一封100个词左右的信。信中应包括以下内容：
1、说明写信目的；
2、对这些行为进行批评；
3、提出建议。
注意：信的开头、落款及信的第一句已给出（不计词数）
June 25, 2012
Dear Mr. Headmaster,
I am Li Ming, a student from, Senior 1.
Your faithfully,
Li Ming

Answer 1

June 25. 2012Dear Mr. Headmaster,
I am Li Yue, a student from Senior 1. I am writing to draw your attention to some improper behavior among us students: littering and scribbling. It makes our school dirty and unpleasant, and does harm to the image of our school. I always feel ashamed whenever I see this. It is clearly not appropriate for a student to litter and scribble about. I wonder if the school could place more dustbins around and set up specific rules against such behaviour. At the same time, students should be encouraged to develop good habits and better behave themselves. I believe that, with the joint efforts of both teachers and students, our school will become a more enjoyable place in the near future. Thank you for your consideration.
Your faithfully,
Li Ming

试题分析：这是一篇建议信，对校园中存在随意涂写（to scribble）和乱丢垃圾（ to litter）的行为，给校长写一封建议信，文章的要点基本上都给了出来，1、说明写信目的； 2、对这些行为进行批评； 3、提出建议。考生只需要一一进行阐述，在写作的时候要运用合适的连接词把要点串联起来，选择词汇的时候要选择相对高级的词汇，也要运用多种句型，让文章更有变化。注意改变文章的样式。难度在于选择合适的词汇和句型表达文章需要的意思，可以变换使用一些容易驾驭的句子或者词汇实现同样的目的。要使用合适的连接词来连接各要点，使文章成为一个整体。
点评：建议信作文的关键在于表达方式的选择和要点的完备，不能有遗漏或者省略。提出建议要切实可行，要符合英语习惯，所以在写作的时候要变换句式，要写得更为亲切直白。