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3．近年来，微信（Wechat）成为了人们非常喜欢的通信工具，但是也给人们带来一些困扰．请对这一现象谈一下自己的看法，内容包括1．使用微信的利与弊；
2．自己的看法和建议．
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．为使行文连贯可适当增加细节．
In recent years，Wechat is becoming increasingly popular．There are many reasons for Wechat to be known．To begin with，Wechat is a relatively cheap way of communication，which cuts down the cost of making a phone call．（高分句型一）Next，Wechat is to the taste of the majority of people，especiallythe youth，with its various functions．Furthermore，it is available everywhere at any time．
However，every coin has two sides．Firstly，our identity can be revealed and we can be in trouble．Moreover，spending too muchtime on your screen will do great harm to your health．（高分句型二）Finally，our attention might be drawntoo much to focus on study．
There is no doubt that Wechat will improve as time goes by．（高分句型三）．

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分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息近年来，微信（Wechat）成为了人们非常喜欢的通信工具，但是也给人们带来一些困扰．请对这一现象谈一下自己的看法，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，要点包括：使用微信的利与弊；自己的看法和建议．2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：In recent years近年来；To begin with首先；cut down 减少；Furthermore而且；However然而；Firstly首先；Moreover而且；do great harm to对…有害；Finally最后；focus on专注于；
To begin with，Wechat is a relatively cheap way of communication，which cuts down the cost of making a phone call．（高分句型一）
Moreover，spending too much time on your screen will do great harm to your health．（高分句型二）
There is no doubt that Wechat will improve as time goes by．（高分句型三）

解答 In recent years，Wechat is becoming increasingly popular．There are many reasons for Wechat to be known．To begin with，Wechat is a relatively cheap way of communication，which cuts down the cost of making a phone call．（高分句型一）Next，Wechat is to the taste of the majority of people，especially the youth，with its various functions．Furthermore，it is available everywhere at any time．
      However，every coin has two sides．Firstly，our identity can be revealed and we can be in trouble．Moreover，spending too much time on your screen will do great harm to your health．（高分句型二）Finally，our attention might be drawn too much to focus on study．
      There is no doubt that Wechat will improve as time goes by．（高分句型三）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．