分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤:1. 认真审题,找准提示语中的关键词或句,确定中心思想.2. 依据关键句,草拟提纲,梳理文章的脉络3. 准确定位人称、时态.注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次.4.最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一:
Once she noticed that I was about to give up halfway after spending ages struggling with my maths homework,so she offered to help me with it
一旦她发现我想中途放弃消费年龄挣扎我的数学作业后,她主动提出帮助我.
高分句型二:
From my perspective,since peer pressure is very important,we should get closer to those who have a positive influence on us,and keep away from those who do not.
从我的角度来看,因为同龄人的压力是非常重要的,我们应该接近那些对我们有积极影响的人,远离那些不积极的人.
解答 The passage explains what peer pressure is.This pressure has positive and negative on our lives.Teenagers give in to peer pressure quite easily,so they should be taught to make good choice.
This reminds me of my classmate,Landa,who is the top student in our class.She has a positive influence on me.Once she noticed that I was about to give up halfway after spending ages struggling with my maths homework,so she offered to help me with it(高分句型一).Unfortunately,she couldn't solve the maths problem straight away.But she kept trying,and worked on the problem for several hours,I was very moved.I was very moved.Since then,her firm determination to overcome difficulties has inspired me whenever I has been in a tricky situation.
From my perspective,since peer pressure is very important,we should get closer to those who have a positive influence on us,and keep away from those who do not(高分句型二).
点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题,并此为基础进行思维和联想,自由发挥.不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力,而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求.
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