Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last week I went to visit to my former neighbor, Mr. Li. He and I used to living next to each other for many years. About half a year ago, an order came which the old building, along with many other similar ones, were going to be pulled down to make room for a main street. So I had to move apart. Mr. Li now lives in the suburbs near a beautiful park. His new apartment is much big than before. The only problem is that it took quite a long time to get to the downtown area. Therefore, Mr. Li doesn’t seem to worry about the long distance. He says that new subway line is to be built in a few year and he is sure life will be better in the future.

Answer 1

【小题1】去掉to 
【小题2】living改为live
【小题3】which改为 that
【小题4】were改为was
【小题5】I改为we
【小题6】big改为bigger
【小题7】took改为takes
【小题8】Therefore改为However
【小题9】that后面加a 
【小题10】year改为years

解析试题分析：文章介绍作者去看望自己的老邻居李先生，他们的房子拆迁了，虽然住的很远，李先生对生活充满希望。
【小题1】去掉to 动词visit是一个及物动词，后面直接加宾语，不需要介词。
【小题2】living改为live 固定搭配used to do sth过去常常做某事；used to后面接动词原形。
【小题3】这是同位语从句，说明order的内容，which不能引导同位语从句。
【小题4】were改为was   本句的主语是the old building这是一个单数名词，在句中作主语谓语用单数形式。
【小题5】I改为we       这里是指Mr. Yang和我不得不分开。
【小题6】big改为bigger 后面有than说明前面应该使用比较级的形式，而且前面有much修饰。Much通常修饰形容词或者副词的比较级形式。
【小题7】took改为takes 本句话是一般现在时的时态，且主语是第三人称单数it所以谓语部分使用takes。
【小题8】Therefore改为However 唯一的问题是到时区要花很多时间，然而他似乎一点也不担心。上下文之间存在着转折关系，故使用however表示转折关系。
【小题9】that后面加a 本句是指一条心的地铁线路将要被修建，故使用不定冠词a表示泛指。
【小题10】year改为years 前面有a few修饰，说明这里是可数名词复数形式
考点：考查短文改错