Question

英语课上，老师要求同桌同学相互修改作文。假设以下作文为你同桌所写，请你对其进行修改。共有10处错误，每句最多两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

   增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

   删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

   修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

   注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

         2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。

         3. 必须按答题要求做题，否则不给分。

My swimming experience is extreme interesting. There is a time when I swam like a rock.

                                                

This went on till one day when I was fishing with a friend of me at a nearby pond. I slipped

                                                     

into it. Had my friends not come to my rescue, I would have been drowned. Ever since then,

   

I have come to know importance of learning to swim. I didn’t attend any training class

               

and learned it all by myself. I have no difficult swimming at all now. Though the way I swim look

                                                           

awkward (笨拙的), at least it can keep me from floating. Thinking of this, I feel quite satisfying.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

 extreme应改为extremely。

 is改为was。

 fme改为mine。

 friend改为friends。

 importance为特指，需加定冠词the。

 改and为but。

 look 改为looks。

 difficult改为difficulty。

 去掉from。

 Satisfying改为为satisfied，满意的。

【解析】

 文中第一句，extreme应该为extremely，副词可用在名词前修饰名词，表示名词的程度，extreme为形容词故应改为副词extremely。

 第二句中，根据从句内容叙述的是过去发生的事情，可知主语描述的是在过去有一个时期，故is改为was。

 第三句中a friend of me，要表达的意思是我的一个朋友，of后面用名词性物主代词，故改为mine。

 Had my friends not come to my rescue,上文提到when I was fishing with a friend of me，是和一个朋友去游泳，故此处friends应改为单数。

 I have come to know importance of learning to swim。这句话中是特指游泳的重要性，故importance为特指，前面需加定冠词the。

 I didn’t attend any training class和learned it all by myself，前后为转折关系，故改and为but。

 Though the way I swim look awkward.此句中主语是the way这个方法，主语为抽象名词，谓语动词用单数第三人称形式，look 改为looks。

 I have no difficult swimming at all now. difficult为形容词困难的意思，此句所表达意思是，现在我游泳一点困难都没有了，困难为名词，故改为difficulty。

 at least it can keep me from floating.根据上文意思可知本句要表达的意思是让我保持漂浮状态，故去掉from。

 I feel quite satisfying. Satisfying令人满意的，指的是物。应该为satisfied，满意的。

考点：考查在句子中中灵活运用词汇、语法的能力.

点评：语法灵活运用能力的考查是短文改错的重点，平时应注重积累，掌握一些熟悉句型，结构的常见用法。答题时注意每个单词在句子中的作用,与上下文的关系.