Question

【题目】今天是世界读书日，请你用英语向大家推荐一本你最喜欢的书。

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要求：

1. 可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。

2. 字数要求：100词左右。

My favorite book

Hello, everyone. I’d like to put forward a book for you for World Book Day,_________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】My favorite book

Hello, everyone. I’d like to put forward a book for you for World Book Day, which is titled The adventures of Tom Sawyer, a famous novel by well-known American writer Mark Twain. Published in 1876, the novel has been popular up to more than a century and influenced generation after generation.

The works is very interesting, including many funny stories about a naughty but smart boy — Tom Sawyer. It describes a series of adventures that Tom Sawyer and his friends have experienced. The humorous style makes the works popular around the world. If you take an interest in the works, you can find not only the English but also Chinese version in our library on the fifth floor.

【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求给读者介绍一本书。

第1步：根据提示可知，本篇介绍说明文；今天是世界读书日，你用英语向大家推荐一本你最喜欢的书——《汤姆索亚历险记》；内容应包括你推荐这本书的原因以及该书的出版信息等。介绍书籍、影视作品时，时态使用一般现在时。

第2步：根据写作要求及图片信息，确定关键信息，如：The adventures of Tom Sawyer（书名）、Mark Twain（作者）、Published in 1876（出版年限）、in our library（在哪里能找到这本书）及推荐该书的理由——many funny stories about a naughty but smart boy，a series of adventures。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【亮点说明】

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