Question

6．假设你叫李华，你的美国朋友Peter来信邀请你今年暑假美国旅游，并到他家去做客．但你经过考虑后，谢绝了他的邀请．请你根据以下提示和要求给Peter写一封回信．
提示：
1．谢绝Peter的邀请；
2．陈述原因（旅游费用高，增加家庭负担；暑假打工，积累社会经验）
3．补救措施（寄一本《今日中国》）．
注意：
1．词数100左右
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Peter，
I'm glad to hear from you．                                            
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 该书面表达为提纲类，考生在答题时要把所有的要点都包括在内：1．谢绝Peter的邀请；2．陈述原因（旅游费用高，增加家庭负担；暑假打工，积累社会经验）3．补救措施（寄一本《今日中国》）．另外时态的选择为一般现在时．适当使用高级句型和过渡连接词．
（高分句型一） it cost a lot to travel abroad，which will add an extra burden to my family．
该句型使用了which引导非限制性定语从句，which充当主语；
（高分句型二）I can not only earn some money to cover my expenses but also improve my social skills．
该句型使用not only…but also引导句子，表示不仅…而且…；
高级词汇：I regret to do 遗憾做；due to因为；burden负担；
First of all，Besides，not only…but also…

解答 Dear Peter，
      I'm glad to hear from you．Thank you very much for inviting me to America this summer．I'd like to accept your warm invitation，but I regret to say that I can't go to your hometown and visit you．（谢绝Peter的邀请）
     （陈述原因）I decline your invitation just due to the following reasons．First of all，（高分句型一） it cost a lot to travel abroad，which will add an extra burden to my family．Besides，I plan to do a part-time job in the summer vacation．（高分句型二）I can not only earn some money to cover my expenses but also improve my social skills．For the reasons mentioned above，I believe you can understand why I can't accept your invitation．I hope this won't affect our friendship from the bottom of my heart．
     （补救措施）I want to send a book named China Today to you to offer my apology．You will have a better understanding of China by reading it．Wish you a pleasant summer．
                                                                                                    Yours'
                                                                                                     Li Hua

点评 提纲类在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点，写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需要积累短语和重要句型．