Question

19．假如你叫李平，你的美国笔友Tom来信询问你十一假期（National Day holiday）过的怎样．请根据表格中的信息给他回信，说明你在十一假期中的活动和理由．
注意：词数不少于100个．

活动	理由
休息	学习紧张，缺少锻炼和休息
看望乡下的祖父母 帮助他们做点家务，并给他们谈了身边的新鲜事	陪伴他们，消除他们的孤独
和朋友进行短途旅游	欣赏大自然，呼吸新鲜空气

Dear Tom，
I'm very glad to receive your letter．And it's a pleasure to tell you something about                                                                                  Yours，
Li Ping．

Answer 1

分析 本文为回信．写作要点为：1．休息．学习紧张，缺少锻炼和休息； 2．看望乡下的祖父母，帮助他们做点家务，并给他们谈了身边的新鲜事；3．和朋友进行短途旅游．欣赏大自然，呼吸新鲜空气．注意一下几点：（1）认真审题，确定体裁． （2）构思要点．根据题目要求，理解要表达的要点．设计好文章的层次段落，考虑所用时态、人称等，把要点串联起来，构成文章框架．（3）选词造句，避难选易．（4）认真检查，避免错误．仔细阅读全文，查找是否有错，注意时态、单词拼写、字母大小写、标点是否有误，句式是否正确．逻辑是否一致．
亮点部分
And it's a pleasure to tell you something about how I spent the National Day holiday．（高分句型）
First，I had a good rest because recently I often felt tired as a result of my heavy study burden as well as lack of sleep and physical exercise．（高分句型）
What's more，I had a trip with my friends to appreciate the beauty of nature and breathe fresh air．（高分句型）

解答 Dear Tom，
     I'm very glad  to receive your letter．And it's a pleasure to tell you something about how I spent the National Day holiday．（高分句型）
     First，I had a good rest because recently I often felt tired as a result of my heavy study burden as well as lack of sleep and physical exercise．（高分句型）Of course，it took me two days to stay with my grandparents living in the countryside and help them do some housework and tell them what happened to me and my friends．（高分句型）What's more，I had a trip with my friends to appreciate the beauty of nature and breathe fresh air．（高分句型）What did you do in your summer holidays？I'm looking forward to hearing from you．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                   Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                    Li Ping

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．