Question

【题目】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记述你们班庆祝王老师即将退休的活动的全过程。

注意：词数不少于60。

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Answer 1

【答案】 Last Monday I was walking on the campus when I heard two students saying that Mrs. Wang, who had been teaching us English for two years, would retire the next month.

I returned to the classroom and shared the news with my classmates. To express our thanks to Mrs. Wang for his patient teaching, we agreed on a celebration after a heated discussion.

After school we began to make preparations. I went to the flower shop to buy a bunch of flowers, representing our love and respect for our dear teacher. One of my classmates made a PPT, which included some photos recording the touching moments we spent together.

On Tuesday morning, when Mrs. Wang came into the classroom, all of us stood up and I presented the flowers to her, with the background showing “Thank you Mrs. Wang! May you be happy every day.” With tears in her eyes, Mrs. Wang was greatly moved by what we did! She said her feelings were beyond words.

But for this experience, I would have never realized the importance of cherishing every moment in our daily life.

【解析】

这是一篇图画作文。要求根据图画提示，写一篇周记，记述你们班庆祝王老师即将退休的活动的全过程。

图表作文的关键是仔细审图，明确每幅图的内容。第一幅图描述了作者听到王老师要退休的消息的场景。第二幅图描述了作者将这个消息告诉同学们的场景。第三幅图描述了同学们为庆祝老师退休做的一些准备活动。第四幅图描述了同学们庆祝王老师退休举行的活动。因为描述的是发生在过去的事情，所以整篇文章应该用过去时态。