Question

假设你是李华，下面海报是你校英语角的一次活动安排。请根据海报内容用英语写一封劝说信，劝说你的朋友王强来参加此次活动并期待他的回复。
注意：1．信件要涵盖海报全部信息； 
　　　2．可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
　　　3．不得逐条翻译海报内容；
　　　3．词数100左右；
　　　4．开头语和结束语已为你写好，不计入总词数。
参考词汇： 字幕subtitle  学术报告厅lecture hall    英语角 English Corner

欢迎到英语角来看电影 Uncle Tom's Cabin 时间：11月30日下午4:30 地点：学术报告厅 学英语、交朋友的好机会； 有英文字幕文件； 　　　 有外教帮助； 　　　 免费提供饮料。

Dear Wang Qiang,
Here is good news for you!                                                    
                                                                                 
                                                                                 
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Wang Qiang,
Here is good news for you! Our English Corner will show an English movie called Uncle Tom’s Cabin in my school on November 30. It’s a great movie with easy English. Don’t be afraid that you might not understand the story because there will be passages of English subtitles prepared for you and foreign teachers will be ready to help you, too. I think it’s a great chance to learn English and to make new friends, too. Besides, free drinks will be offered. The movie will be shown at the Lecture Hall at 4:30. I do hope you can come and join us for such a good opportunity. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua

试题分析：考查应用文中的书信的写作。假设你是李华，请根据海报内容用英语写一封劝说信，劝说你的朋友王强来参加此次活动并期待他的回复。要点都已经给出，书信类短文的关键在于要点要全面包括，不能有遗漏和省略。描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文。
【亮点说明】文章要点齐全，语言简洁明了，句式也富有变化： Our English Corner will show an English movie called Uncle Tom’s Cabin in my school on November 30. 这句话用了过去分词做定语， Don’t be afraid that you might not understand the story because there will be passages of English subtitles prepared for you and foreign teachers will be ready to help you, too. 这句话用了原因状语从句，I think it’s a great chance to learn English and to make new friends, too., 这句话用了it做形式主语， I do hope you can come and join us for such a good opportunity.这句话用了强调谓语， I’m looking forward to your reply. 还有文章还使用Besides这样的关联词，使文章更加连贯。