Question

假如你是Jack Darwin, 你的客户Li Ming给你写了一封信, 内容如下：
Dear Jack,
I’m writing this letter to ask for a favor. I will visit England soon, but I know little about the culture of England. Please give me a hand.
Yours,
Li Ming
请给Li Ming回一封信，要点如下：
1．遵守靠左行走或驾驶的交通规则，出门带伞；
2．公共场合应注意的问题(如保持安静)；
3．和英国人交往要遵守的事项(如提前预约，尊重隐私)。
注意：
1．词数：120左右，信的格式、开头和结尾已好，不计入总词数
2．参考词汇：appointment  n.预约
3．无需逐条翻译，可适当增加细节。

Answer 1

Dear Li Ming,
It is a great chance to visit England. Just take the following points into account and you will find your vacation comfortable.
First, you should adapt yourself to driving and walking on the 1eft, which is the basic rule of British traffic. Besides, you’d better get into the habit of bringing an umbrella when going out as the weather there is changeable. Second, please keep quiet even in public places like supermarkets because noise is offensive there. Also, remember to keep some distance when talking with British people since they don’t like to be too close to others. Third, every time you are going to see a doctor or visit a friend, you’d better make an appointment ahead of time. By the way, it is a good thing to bring a small gift. Last but not least, it is very impolite to ask questions about one’s privacy, which will easily cause misunderstanding.
Have a good time.
Yours sincerely,
Jack Darwin

试题分析：考查应用文中的书信的写作。你的客户Li Ming给你写了一封信询问你英国的文化和风俗习惯情况，请根据以下要点给他回信。要点都已经给出，书信类短文的关键在于要点要全面包括，不能有遗漏和省略。同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。审题时注意时态的选择，描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。
【亮点说明】范文使用了一些常用的短语：take ... into account 把......考虑进去；get into the habit of 养成......习惯；make an appointment ahead of time提前预约；which is the basic rule of British traffic. which引导非限制性定语从句； every time you are going to see a doctor or visit a friend,这句话用 every time 引导时间状语从句；用First,Second,Third,Last but not least,使文章条理清晰；用Besides，Also，By the way,使文章更加连贯。