Question

近年来酒后驾车致死案件接连发生，引发了社会高度关注。请你根据以下内容，以“Treasure Our Lives”为题在你的个人博客上发文，奉劝司机朋友珍爱生命，切莫酒后驾车。

案 例	2011年10月29日，河南一警察酒后驾车发生事故，导致5死3伤
呼 吁	关爱生命，社会和家人；拒绝酒后驾车；自我防范
措 施	提出至少两项措施。

   参考词汇：pedestrian  n. 行人         consequence   n.  结果
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Answer 1

Treasure Our Lives
With the number of private cars increasing rapidly, traffic accidents due to drunk driving occur frequently, leading to tragic consequences. On October 29, 2011, drunk driving in Henan resulted in five deaths and three injuries. These accidents not only cost the lives of many people but also ruined the life of many others. Harmonious society calls on people to treasure their lives as well as that of their family. Drivers must obey the laws and traffic rules, and say "no" to drunk driving. At the same time, severe punishment should be carried out without mercy, and the sale of alcohol should be limited in restaurants. For the sake of safety, pedestrians are never too careful while crossing streets and never run red lights. Only when everybody obeys traffic rules, can we enjoy a happier life.

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