Question

众所周知，这些年我国经济发展迅速，可是环境污染也越来越严重，发展经济与环境保护之间的关系问题一直为社会各界所关注。下面是某班同学的讨论结果，请你就此给某英文报社写一封信介绍讨论情况并简要阐述自己的观点。
1. 一些同学认为经济发展不应以环境为代价。
理由：忽视环境而发展经济将对环境造成破坏。列举一些严重的环境问题。
2. 一些同学认为经济发展不应考虑环境问题。
理由：发展经济必然带来环境问题，环境问题是经济发展的副产品，等以后有了钱和时间再来解决。
3. 你的个人观点……
注意：1. 信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；
2. 词数：150左右；
3. 参考词汇：不可避免的unavoidable 副产品by-product
以……为代价at the cost of/ sacrifice …for …
Dear editor,
I am writing to tell you about the discussion we’ve had about the relationship between economic development and environmental protection.
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Answer 1

Dear editor
I am writing to tell you about the discussion we’ve had about the relationship between economic development and environment protection.
Some students believe we should never sacrifice environment for economy. They think the present environmental problems are largely caused by rapid economic development. For example, farmable land is decreasing because of the industrial development and the development of cities.
However, other students think it unnecessary to consider environmental problems now and economic development comes first. They believe that environmental problems are only the by-products of economic development, which are unavoidable. They can be dealt with later when we have the time and money.
I think the second view is completely wrong. The purpose of economic development is to provide a comfortable and happy life for our people. We should aim at sustainable development and a balance between the two.
Yours,
Li Hua

试题分析：本题是一篇材料作文。要求向英文报社写一封信，介绍讨论发展与环保的结果。学生比较熟悉书信格式，作文要点已经给出。可以分为三段，第一段支持环保；第二段支持发展；第三段给出自己的观点。作文必须包含所有要点，所给参考词汇必须用上，否则会扣分。注意句与句之间，段与段之间的衔接要自然。
【亮点说明】范文使用了第一人称，比较有礼貌。范文条理清晰，逻辑明确，很好的表达了讨论的结果和自己的观点。I am writing to tell you about...是写信常用的开头格式。范文交替使用believe和think来表达观点，避免了重复。范文使用For example, However等来连接前后文，使文章显得自然流畅；范文使用了较多的语法知识，像被动语态are largely caused by和be dealt with；定语从句we’ve had about the relationship...和which are unavoidable；固定句型think it unnecessary to...和provide...for sb及The purpose of...is to；宾语从句believe that...；时间状语从句when we have the time and money；范文使用never和only来加强语气，更能突出作者的态度和观点；范文也使用了短语because of和aim at等，使文章内容充实。