Question

你刚进入高中新的学习生活，某英文报欲征集有关高一新生学习经验的小短文.请以“How to Be a Good Learner”为题写一篇英语短文。短文应包括以下要点：
① 学习方法的重要性，善学者学习效果好；② 有计划，常总结（sum up）; ③ 会用工具书（reference book），如查词典，善用机会和资源(resource)，如问老师或同学等；④ 提前预习（preview），课堂认真听讲和课后及时复习（go over）；⑤ 成功的秘诀：勤奋加方法。
注意：不要直接翻译要点，可适当增加细节；词数：100词左右。 注意书写要整洁干净。
How  to   Be  a  Good  Learner
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Answer 1

How to Be a Good Learner
Learning methods are very important to every student. Usually a good learner gets twice the result with half the effort. Now I'd like to share my opinions about learning methods with you.
To be a good learner, you should have a good study plan and you have to sum up what you have learned often. You can solve problems with the help of reference books, such as a dictionary. You ought to seize every chance to learn and make use of all kinds of learning resources. You can ask teachers or your classmates for help when you meet with some difficulties., Besides, preview your new lessons, listen to the teachers carefully in class and go over the old lessons on time.
Remember that diligence and good methods are the key to success.

试题分析：这是一篇提纲式作文：要求写一份有关高一新生学习经验的小短文，要点给的很全面细致，因此考生首先要根据所给提纲和要点，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
【亮点说明】 Usually a good learner gets twice the result with half the effort. 这句话是倍数的表达， To be a good learner, you should have a good study plan and you have to sum up what you have learned often. 这句话用了不定式做目的状语和名词性从句， You ought to seize every chance to learn and make use of all kinds of learning resources. 这句话用了高级词汇seize和词组make use of利用，You can ask teachers or your classmates for help when you meet with some difficulties., preview your new lessons, listen to the teachers carefully in class and go over the old lessons on time. 这句话用了时间状语从句，     Remember that diligence and good methods are the key to success. 这句话用了宾语从句和词组the key to success成功的关键。还有文章还使用了Besides,怎样的关联词，使文章更加连贯。