Question

近年微博（microblog）在中国越来越流行，2011年也被有关媒体称为“微博元年”。假设你是校报记者，请根据提示为校报写一篇介绍微博的英语短文。
1.非常方便，人们可以随时利用微博来表达心声，交流想法；
2.给人们提供了一种释放压力的方式； 3.与朋友分享心情，增进了解；
4.也有潜在的危险，有可能泄露个人隐私或其他重要信息；
5.综上所述，使用微博要谨慎。
注意：1．短文必须包括所有内容要点，可适当增加关联词句；
2．不可用简单的逐条列举式翻译，要点在串联的句中体现；
3．词数：100--110左右；（已给部分不计入总词数）
Microblog has become part of our life. ____________________________________________________
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Answer 1

Microblog has become part of our life. It is very convenient for people to express their feelings instantly at any time. Besides , it provides a chance for people to release their inner stress. By showing their heartfelt emotions on the microblog, their friends may also know about their condition and can offer timely comfort.
However, microblog can also be potentially dangerous as it may give away people’s privacy and other significant information. All in all, microblog provides us with some concerns as well as comfort and large quantities of information, so we should be careful while using it.

试题分析：本题是材料作文。所有要点已经给出，作文必须包含所有要点，不能简单的逐字逐句翻译，要有连贯性。尽量使用高级词汇，多使用短语和从句，来增加作文的亮点。注意不能出现 拼写和语法错误。
亮点说明：范文使用了较多的连接词，像Besides，However，All in all，so 等，使作文比较连贯。范文使用了较多的短语和句型，如It is very convenient for people to...，give away，provides us with，as well as，large quantities of等。显示了作者较强的语言功底。